Patrick Carr
Summer 2024 | Poetry
A Vacation of Sorts in Key West
The mortician stuffs his mouth
with steak and eggs
and the coffin maker pens another
ten-page love letter
and the grave digger tunes an old guitar
and the hearse driver splashes
rum into his coffee
and the florist
guillotines a fat cigar and
five tombstones idle
outside the island monument shop
in Elizabeth Bishop’s “Tombstones for Sale,”
watercolor with gouache and ink, six inches by nine,
never sold, never for sale, and emphatically
“NOT Art—NOT AT ALL.”
Business can wait.
The tropical morning—in the painting,
the tropical morning—
snoozes through the dawn.
The cemetery fence yawns
and waves away a wild chicken.
The monument shop,
a cottage really, is shuttered,
and dreams of undiscovered rooms.
It would tremble in a wind gust.
Tombstones plod through here
like dirges wafting
from a penny whistle.
The sun is low enough there is no sun.
A poinciana tree rises over the scene
past the unmarked outlined stones,
potted plants,
and bursts into a canopy
of red and green flowers and leaves,
a shade tree that is up too early.
Foliage fills in against the shop roof
and balances down the branches
from the pale sky to the facade.
It blots the shop
and the shop’s neighbor in the back,
a ghostly double.
The shop’s two lined-in windows are shut.
The lined-in double doors are shut
and have no knob.
The dead are nowhere to be found.
Rising again notice
the poinciana—bent, bowing,
flush with bright red flowers,
reminding you that in its depths
the earth is liquid,
that every tombstone
stands beside the universe.
It is sorry for blooming
in your view and hopes
you are not troubled
by any greater inconvenience.
Look. It is one of us.
Its red and green hang
one against the other,
alternating passion and ease,
agony and relief.
Lifetimes jitter off the branches.
It looks like a tree you’ve been looking at
too long, like you would see it
with your eyes shut,
if only for a few seconds. Even now it’s fading.
The tombstones abide, still blank slates.
If you took a rubbing, you would see
a perfect picture of the void, but
the stones stand in the same order
—tallest in the middle, two on either side—
the same order precisely
as the petals of a poinciana flower.
Look as long as you want.
The tombstones are not for you.
They are a flower, which is.
Patrick Carr is one half of @dogsdoingthings on Twitter. His poems have appeared in Conduit Magazine and The Florida Review. He lives in Jersey City.